Hello, today I decided to do the daily prompt. This is a mostly unedited poem. Please let me know what you think.
Precious
Who is precious?
Who can do no wrong?
There is only one.
With love flowing out
he came to the ground
with all the power
of the earth he owned,
He humbled himself to save every soul;
he came to rescue everyone.does no wrong
Yes my precious lives far above,
yes the one who can do no wrong
wrote the rules of the universe in our hearts.
He is love and truth.
He rescues those who,
by the free will he gave,
chose to walk away.
He is in my precious.
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So true! And perfect for Christmas time!
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I believe so and thank you for your appreciation.
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